I'm Fine

I'm Fine

A Poem by Jaala
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I'm fine Save me

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I'm fine
Don't worry
My smile is real
I'm truly happy
I haven't been crying
Don't look into my eyes and ask if I'm okay

Save me
Help me
I have lost my joy
My will to live
Everyday is a new struggle
A new tear
I'm not okay, why won't someone help me

People made promises that they will always be there for me
If you ever need anything just call
But they lied
Their eyes pieced into my soul
They looked down on me
They were disgusted by me
I smiled and played there games
It's okay, I'm fine
I don't want to cry
Inside I was gone
I needed help
I needed love
I don't care who is it
Somebody take me from this world
This place full of hurt and hate
It doesn't keep it's promises
It hides it's true form behind a mask of love and smiles
Don't believe them
They won't help you

© 2018 Jaala


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Jaala
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This piece truly had a lot of strong powerful,emotion. I somehow found bits of myself in this. As someone who has dealt with depression in the past, I know what it feels like and I felt really connected to it on a deep personal level.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jaala

6 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you can relate

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Added on February 18, 2018
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Tags: Poem, writing, happy, sad, I'm fine, I'm not fine, help me, save me, I'm happy

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Jaala
Jaala

Australia



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