A Plump and Wise Mosquito (Who never knew what it had coming)

A supposedly wise mosquito who never knew what it had coming its way...

 I walked into the room

sat patiently in my seat

when I saw a large mosquito

laying near my feet

 

The mosquito was large

plump, and fat

With experience and knowledge 

I knew I was no match

 

For this mosquito 

that lay near my feet

With speed and cunning

I knew I could not beat

 

This wise mosquito

that I try to swat, hit and kill

Knew what he was doing

and was up for the thrill

and satisfaction of knowing he can't be beat

 

So I soon gave up

and he resumed to occupy his spot

laying near my feet

 

In a moment of weakness, 

Vulnerability and dread

I quickly rose my foot

And the wise mosquito was dead

 

Reviews

[TheOther]

You murderer :O (jk) Nice job. This is so original and it can be seen metaphorically too. :)

[Skin]

Please please I implore you, make the wise mosquito a female, as they are the ones who bite, pretty please . . . .

[Mickey Longstreet]

This is great. Its pure, unforgivingly innocent. Such things wouldnt occur to many people in the sixth grade, but I adore its simplicity. Right on.

[Neva Flores - Changeful..]

I think you did an awesome job for a 6th grader. Wow!

[Claudia]

hahaahhhhahhahhahahahaha *falls over*

Hah wow that's weird. XD