diamond- Padded Walls

diamond- Padded Walls

A Poem by Jack Diamond
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A funny peom about the better parts of insanity

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My sanity is dead
 
I've been betrayed by my own head
 
Get a grip?
 
S**t, show me how
 
I'll never figure this mess out now
 
I've gone insane
 
I'm out of my brain
 
I'm hanging by a wire
 
My heart and my mind are mad at each other
 
And lighting up a funeral pyre
 
Normal is overrated
 
And strange is understated
 
My mind, I could not hold it
 
I didn't lose it
 
The harpies stole it
 
Um...
 
Whoops I'm sorry
 
 I lost myself...
 
What's going on again
 
Why even try to keep this straight
 
Who's smarter?
 
Mice?
 
Or men
 
My own fictional terrorist,
 
 Put a plane into my brain
 
Isn't it strange that brain rhymes with insane?
 
Switch the "a" and "i" and you get Brian
 
He's one of those "normal" guys
 
These kinds of thing don't bug him
 
He never wonders why
 
Screw you Brian I hate you
 
Not really, but you don't care
 
"normal" people are strange to me,
 
I can't help but stop and stare
 
It's 4:00am. I'm half a*s dead
 
I'm still awake...I think
 
Off my rocker?
 
S**t I broke it
 
Writing poetry with clear ink
 
Stick brick flick trick
 
Luck buck duck truck 
 
Ray day hey SAY!
 
We all die anyway
 
So what's the use in praying?
 
Oops, I'm off on my own again
 
I'm sorry what were you saying?
 

© 2008 Jack Diamond


Author's Note

Jack Diamond
Just rambling, it's not meant to make any sense

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Not making sense just emphasizes the insanity, which I believe we all suffer in one form or another. I had to come straight to this piece because I'm in need of a rubber room myself. I was laughing about Brian...cuz I know one...and he's not much of a brain!!
This line made me lol: The harpies stole it

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Not making sense just emphasizes the insanity, which I believe we all suffer in one form or another. I had to come straight to this piece because I'm in need of a rubber room myself. I was laughing about Brian...cuz I know one...and he's not much of a brain!!
This line made me lol: The harpies stole it

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats the thing it does make sense!! Good write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Makes perfect sense to me! I know two Brians, and both of them are weird in their own ways. I guess if you think about it, we all are weird. Aliens would look down on us and think 'Hey! They only have one head! How weird can you get?' Lovely poem once again. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jack Diamond
Jack Diamond

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