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Diamond- To Feel so Small Under the Stars

Diamond- To Feel so Small Under the Stars

A Poem by Jack Diamond
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poetry that comes to mind while all alone looking up at the stars

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It feels so good

To feel so small

gazeing to the heavens

out above us all

out here in the open

not a single light or sound

out here all alone

laying on the ground

the stars are here to comfort me

eraceing scars you cannot see

I love to be alone out here at night

something about it just feals so right

picking out constellations

like my canvas in the sky

out here on my own

hours pass on by

greeted by my friends Orion,

draco, and pegasus

every time the clouds come by

my stars I dearly miss

here I can forget about,

all the things that make my my life so scary

it really is too bad,

that it's only temorary


© 2008 Jack Diamond



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Jack Diamond
so what do you think of it? I think it's one of my better prose style poem

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It really is good. I just have a few changes to make, but you probably typed it out in a hurry so don't worry :) When I was in the Cedeberg (A really cold place) There were thousands and thousands of stars. You could literaly see a shooting star every 10 minutes. I thought I was in heaven... Your poem captures the essence of that feeling, and that's all that counts!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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It really is good. I just have a few changes to make, but you probably typed it out in a hurry so don't worry :) When I was in the Cedeberg (A really cold place) There were thousands and thousands of stars. You could literaly see a shooting star every 10 minutes. I thought I was in heaven... Your poem captures the essence of that feeling, and that's all that counts!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jack Diamond
Jack Diamond

McGregor, MN



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If you're reading my writing then let me say thanks you. you are now on my good graces thus making you "cool". I am sorry to say but I am really only interested in rythmic poetry, if You write free ve.. more..

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