Bane

Bane

A Poem by Jackie
"

We are so dirty. here in the mud. Out on this journey so full of crud

"
There is. So much evil, here on this plain

And so many people. it drives me insane

We are so deceitful, we are so vain

We are so evil. We are bane


There is so much in our blood

It runs like poison, tons, like a flood

We are so dirty here in the mud

Out on this journey so full of crud


I am Embarrassed to admit

we are careless. While I still give a s**t

We don't forgive, we don't forget

We hardly live. Just continue to let it slip


There is. Is so much evil, here on this plain

And so many people, it drives me insane

WE are deceitful. We are so vain

We are so evil. We are bane


I am ashamed I am involved

Of all the games that cant be solved

We are all to blame. As we let it evolve

the mistakes the same. We watch it all dissolve


slip from our grasp closer to our last call

We watch it all collapse, we watch it all fall

we watch with our final glance. As we begin to crawl

But we proceed to dance, we don't give in at all


Our blood is and has always been tainted

all this evil we are all so deceitful.

All of these people so un-peaceful

I could write

a million words for all that has been painted

in spite

for the devil has always been acquainted


There is. so much evil, here on this plain

And so many people, it drives me insane

We are deceitful. We are so vain

We are so evil. We are bane




CJ Potts

February 1st, 2017


© 2017 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
Brand new February 1st, 2017!! hope ya'll like

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Ok... Why haven't you submitted work for my podcast? Here is today's podcast give it a listen and see if you would be interested. https://soundcloud.com/user-557255780/coffee-with-underhill-02-01-2017

Good write and I would suggest submitting. I enjoyed the rhyme and meter on this one

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jackie

7 Years Ago

How often do you air?
J Todd Underhill

7 Years Ago

Monday - Friday
Jackie

7 Years Ago

Alright cool. Thanks. I've actually been thinking since yesterday. About what I wanna do. How I gon.. read more



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i had no idea of the deceit,hate and corruption in america until mr trump took office,our country is a lot worse than i thought

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ok... Why haven't you submitted work for my podcast? Here is today's podcast give it a listen and see if you would be interested. https://soundcloud.com/user-557255780/coffee-with-underhill-02-01-2017

Good write and I would suggest submitting. I enjoyed the rhyme and meter on this one

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jackie

7 Years Ago

How often do you air?
J Todd Underhill

7 Years Ago

Monday - Friday
Jackie

7 Years Ago

Alright cool. Thanks. I've actually been thinking since yesterday. About what I wanna do. How I gon.. read more

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Jackie

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