Wordplay 2

Shouldn't belittle, get critical 

To be subliminal should be criminal 

Shouldn't have secrets on the low

Ought to be some sort of reciprocal

No need to get physical. Like on the internet. 

Digital. Could get started on a simple note

That's not all. Not all he wrote

It's minuscule. petty. so messy. 

To ridicule. Typical. Pitiful. already 

want to get rid of you. Sick of you

Individuals. It's eventual. Repetitive 

but but got to vent, you know. 

Expose how much i resent people. 

It's fecal matter

These turn of events shown Have i outgrown

My mind blown. If i could disown and leave 

this chapter. Have we descended below

Or has hell ascended. I have defended

yet so many offended. We are desperate 

for a cure. To replenish. There are voices 

to be heard. We need soldiers. To protect

To put a plan in to effect to keep this 

fortress secured

So many impure. Aspiring dreams 

to bring fourth tears. Before bed 

they have a toast. And say Cheers

We are not in The clear. 

We hold a whole lot dear as well 

as an immense amount of fear

We are here. The madness 

will continue to sear. 

We are here. This chaos 

will not disappear

We must fight. side by side and unite

There is no time to be polite. So we fight

We fight for our rights. We fight beyond 

the night with the goal in our sight

So much to behold with all our might

We fight. And we rise. There is no giving in

This is more than just a war within

We will fight. Because the fight never ends

July 3rd, 2017

Jackie Gunnin

Author's Note

some wordplay.. Let me know what you think...

Reviews

[Abraham George]

So many impure. Aspiring dreams
to bring fourth tears. Before bed
they have a toast. And say Cheers
We are not in The clear.
We hold a whole lot dear as well
as an immense amount of fear
We are here. The madness
will continue to sear.
We are here. This chaos
will not disappear


my fav lines. beautifully used the words to keep the rhythm.

[EJ's Horror]

I love it Jackie, you're rhymes, especially the multi-symbolic ones whether intentional or not gave this former rap-writer a wordgasm

[Cmini]

So good loved how did a lot of word that's something I struggle with