A Poem by Jenel Jackson

Your piercing green eyes and faded orange hair feel safe, soothing even.
They give me comfort from restless nights.
Even though no words are spoken in this pin drop silence.
I know you see right through me.
And I find some odd sense of comfort in that cause no one else can.
It's too bad your nothing but a figment of my imagination.
The best friend I wish I had in real life.
But until then I will continue to suffer in silence.

© 2018 Jenel Jackson

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Comma needed after safe in the first line. I find this very inspiring for myself as a writer, it could be a prompt for a longer story. Well done

Posted 8 Months Ago

Pin drop silence my favourite line, I enjoyed the poem keep writing your poetry reminds me of the stuff I write

Posted 8 Months Ago

I opened this writing because you said it was a story.
Two mistakes.

Posted 9 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jenel Jackson

9 Months Ago

Sorry that was an accident

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3 Reviews
Added on December 28, 2017
Last Updated on January 15, 2018