Cannabis

I'm still there
I can still feel the frosted air
The dank smell of the parking lot
The fear that had settled in my bones
I can still hear myself having a conversation with my friends as we waited for someone, anyone to come out of the store
And the chill when someone finally did
How my heart stopped in my chest when my friend asked him to go in there for us
And the automatic NO
That came out of his mouth like he'd done it a million times before
Seen a girl like me
Standing there
Eyes wide with fear
And as he walked away I made eye contact with him while he pulled out his phone
The cursing of my friend mere background noise

I felt realived, disappointed, and grateful
all at once.

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

This story is very dramatic and reads real life and true account so I would love it for u to explain it further. You were alone and scared and the person refused to help yet did eventually? What were u scared of? Anyway this is written eloquently and awesomely ESP as to word choice and how you describe. Kudos lots.

Soo nice to read from your inking again, pleez do comment/add your thoughts/ review my newest poem too. I like saying hi to poets and poetry.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A blessing in disguise; what we think we need is not what we really need - actions we take affect the outcomings of our lives. You have creatively written a poignantly emotional composition, with deep meaning and relevance - great job!

[Jade Stone]

Thank you so much, it really means a lot.
I was really hesitant in posting this.