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Life as a Game

Life as a Game

A Poem by Jadon96
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This is a short poem that has a true meaning to life. So, go ahead and take a look.

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Life is like a chain, 

one section lain, and you will be slain.

You live life like a game,

when you win, there will be fame.

When you lose, there is pain.

Wonders came, but then you broke the chain.

Life seemed to go down the drain,

all your friends think you’re lame,

Slowly fading away your name.

There’s no one else to blame, for the awful reign.

There’s no gain, unless you wash off all the ashame.

So try to live life like a picture frame. 

Take yourself out and examine your aim. 

Change your attitude and prove the perfect acclaim. 

Capture your life and reach out and reclaim. 

Now, see if you end up the same.


© 2014 Jadon96



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Jadon96
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This one I feel allot of people could relate to.
I like the way you have written it out, all the same word rhyming but with this line:
So try to live life like a dream,
Its the only line that didn't match the rest, puts the poem kinda out of place, maybe make that rhyme to.
Besides that I liked this one to :)
Well done :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


cimmy wuv xxxooo

3 Years Ago

Yer see ya :) Have a good day at school. Tell the haters to go suck a.... yer maybe not :P
Jadon96

3 Years Ago

Haha, I enjoy my classes though, so it won't be too bad
cimmy wuv xxxooo

3 Years Ago

Thats good than :)

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Jadon96
Jadon96

West Frankfort, IL



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