Trapped by one Kiss

So I threw in some songs as well as Dutch

Trapped in a cage

The mind is crazed

Two souls stranded apart

One is the key

The other the gatekeeper

Het verledenhoop van het slaapwandelen

 

Together in death

Our souls never part

These words I heard

As I listened to the faint beats of your heart

 

The world has gone mad

Or so it seems

I might be crazy

I think it is just me

 

I turn around to hear your voice

Liefde u voor altijd

Whispers in the wind

It is just your ghost

 

 

Romance is deadly

Even in lust

Our bodies together

As they turn to dust

 

Eternally yours

I wish it were true

Ik ben voor altijd veroordeeld Venus

 

Rescue Me

That is what I hear

As I wait for the drug induced fog to clear

 

As I yank on the straps

That bind my wrists

The cold leather

Your deadly kiss

 

Were you real?

Were you death?

Am I crazy?

Or did I finally jump off the ledge?

 

So many questions

The needle pierces the vein

Bij het kalmeren van tonen, you' re niet krankzinnig

 

Euphoria

Bliss

Locked in a padded room

Because of one kiss

Author's Note

Some of the songs were by H.I.M and Tokio Hotel, although I'm not sure if the font works but I liked the fact that it adds to the craziness
Translations:
Het verledenhoop van het slaapwandelen=Sleepwalking past hope (H.I.M. song)
Liefde u voor altijd=Love you for always
Ik ben voor altijd veroordeeld Venus=I have been always condemned for Venus (loosely translated)
Bij het kalmeren van tonen, you' re niet krankzinnig=In soothing tones you're not insane

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

this is great... love sure can make us feel on the edge and make us do some crazy things... very nicely expressed.

[Georgia Gypsy]

Hey! you didnt send me a read request on this! *pouts in the corner*
but i love it.....or did i read in via email? dont remember

love the flow and language....lends such mystery though my mind jumps to what i think it means....then i read the translation at the end and read the wholething over again!

Love it...the visual is so.....powerful, we are all powerless to love and passion....it can sweep us away even when we dont want it to...

well done!
*heres' a gummy snake for you....puts the box down and walks away*

[*** Hey Jude***]

Great verve as you share your emotions with passion. I would love to hear your work lyrically. My bro is in a band as well, vocal, brass, and keyboard. Thanks for sharing the translations; as this piece is so enticing I would have looked them up! Great work ~ Jude :-)

[Sean M. Addams]

wow this is an awesome and dark piece.. like the imagery in this alot... your talent shows through as always... nice job on this... :)

[Gandré]

wow this poems reads like the songs of H.I.M. ... (my favorite is the FUneral of Hearts)..... very gothic. Loved.