Prologue

2008

 

The Girl who sat in front of me

Based on a true story

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“Don’t you ever f**king talk to me again, I never want to see your face!” those earth shattering words, brought pain upon my fragile heart, this girl who I had given my all to for the past five years had completely done a 180. She was not the same girl, who I wore matching swimsuits with, nor was she the girl who I could sit back and watch cheesy Disney films with on a Sunday afternoon without feeling well...cheesy.

No this girl was the total opposite. She looked the same, she even smelt the same but she was nowhere near who she used to be.

In fact it used to be very, very different between us.

This is the tale of Jale and Jane.

*Names changed for privacy purposes.

Reviews

[.quan.011.]

This is wonderful introduction, that describes what the story. You describe the main character's feeling very well. I know that she is heartbroken. You showed it instead of just telling us. Overall this is amazing chapter.

[SuicidePact.]

Thank-you, I'm surprised my memory worked that well.

[Ama May Cooper]

Nice introduction. You clearly describe the story and what is going to happen in the next few pages.
Its a little bit cliche but hey who said that's a bad thing.
Nice start

[SuicidePact.]

Lol thanks...this is an actual conversation I had Lol

so I guess my life is cliche

[Ama May Cooper]

I mean to write about , alot of cliche things happen on day to day dosent mean your life is cliche at all darling