Love not Gender

He fell in love with a person,

All the world could see was gender.

He just wanted to bear his soul,

Not stick his heart in a blender

The difference between right and wrong,

Nobody seems to remember

If love is love,

Why does it matter what gender?

Reviews

[Rikkevi Rue]

indeed! The color of love is known to exist in no place that can be defined in a language that has yet to be written but is nonetheless known by all...judge we not another to lessen perchance therein we find our selves!

But you say it so righteously! Brava! :-)

[Fiona Nadine]

So great! I love how simple it is, but it says so much. :)

[Eve]

That is beautiful! You capture such a simple idea is a few lines, but they are so deep.

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

seriously healed my heart! an amazing meaningful piece of art; extremely impressive.

[Sam]

Good Job! Your details make a flow to your piece of writing! :)

[Pax]

well that is societies flaws my friend ~ it's been a never ending debate...
whatever your heart goes, go for it! life is too short for societies barricaded walls of blindness...

[Marie]

It doesn't.