Let you in

A pointed star,

A violin string,

I opened my heart

And I let you in.

 

My heart is pickled,

Broken and bruised,

Without your touch,

I have everything to lose.

 

People far are people near,

Want to be where we are,

To feel what we have.

It’s all written in the stars,

Mended hearts and candies on strings,

The best I ever did,

Was letting you in.

Reviews

[Tarry Franck]

Very well written. Flowed gracefully.

[𝐋.𝐂.]

A unique way to describe how you let the person enter your world.