My surfer Girl.

A Book by SuicidePact.

Tera and Kaetelita are married, on their way home kaetalita is killed in a crash, and Tera reconnects with his wife by reading and re-living the memories they both cherished.

Chapters

© 2012 SuicidePact.

Author's Note

# WHEN i ORIGINALLY WROTE THIS, I WROTE IT IS A SCREEN PLAY, THEREFORE IT IS TAKING ME LONGER TO UPLOAD IT AS A NOVEL, BARE WITH ME IT TAKES A LITTLE WHILE TO CONVERT IT AND SLIGHTY CHANGE ORDER AND ALSO I HAVE TO ADD MORE DESCRIPTIONS.

# When I wrote I tend to do it at a fast pace so I can get it all down before i forget the idea. Therefore i often make spelling and grammatical mistakes, feel free to point them out

#Tell me what you think about the plot as of yet, are the characters believable? Can you see where I am heading?

# No Tera is not a mistake for Tara, he is a man not a woman, Tera is almost pronounced 'Terror' and his Wife Kaetalita is pronouned 'Ka-ta-lee-tar'

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First off, thanks for asking me to review. Overall I thought it was interesting. It had a few mistakes but nothing editing couldn't fix. The young punk has to be Tera. I liked the dialogue, and the diary entries, they moved the story along nicely. I know when I write stories I tend to "tell" rather than "show" which is all the more important for things like action and dialogue to convey story. That's all I can think of for now, overall, above average, keep going :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago

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Reviews

Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram

An excellant piece. With wishes.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Becky Clancy

I really love books that have diary entries, I really loved your book, I hope you write more books :3

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Missy Moooooo

Im excited to read :)
Thanks for Sharing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Tomislav Petricevic

Although the story is fast paced, you can always add some new parts to the existing chapters, so you don't have to worry about that all the time. I like it how you didn't dwell into some really long characterizations - that way the reader can get his own image of the character based on that character's actions. And some grammar mistakes didn't actually bother me at all.
Good job! :D