Laughing.

I can't stpo laughing.

 

There's tears in my eyes.

 

I can't stop laughing

 

my sides are getting sore

 

I can't stop laughing

 

the feeling it's contageous

 

I can't stop laughing

 

It's taken over me.

 

I can't stop giggling

 

I'd be frightful just to see

 

I can't stop my chuckle

 

It's not up to me

 

I can't stop my cackling

 

I'm acting like a Clown.

 

I can't stop laughing

 

I'm falling towards the ground.

 

My sides are Aching

 

or so it appears.

 

It's contagious

 

It's outrageous

 

and i can't stop.

 

I just can't stop.

 

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice write, funny how this is so true.
I like this part, I know i feel like this with laughter:
"I can't stop laughing

my sides are getting sore

I can't stop laughing

the feeling it's contageous"

Also a correction in this part: contagious.
As well as the first line in the poem, stop "I can't stpo laughing."

[WILDERNESS]

in the end i was smilimg............nice

[Sophie]

I like this, I feel like this everyday at lunch with my friends :) Great write

[Angelic Surrender]

This is great :) I love times like this. Great work

[Morrigan Nicole]

Love this! so tatally true! I feel this way everytime i get a good laugh!

[5minutesofcrazy]

I like this. It's somewhat haunting in comparison to the other poems I've read of yours. I feel as if it is veiled language, though I could be wrong. I like the style and the structure of it. Well done...

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Let me rephrase that- "makes me want to laugh just reading it" because it's such a joyful poem!!

I hope that wasn't misinterpreted!

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Great poem!! Makes me want to laugh just reading it! :D

[Aidz]

shh 1st line typo stop

I enjoyed this and I could feel the mirth within :)

I liked this as well, continue the good work. This is only a beginning, don't doubt your talents.