I wonder.

I can't believe we were once more than friends

I can't believe I once caused you pain.

Yes i took a gamble

I left you for another man,

someone who was already taken.

 

Some say that was a stupid thing,

in my defence at least I never led you on.

Now I sometimes talk to you

and wonder what it would be like.

if that never happened.

 

I long for a day, where he didn't take you away

I long for you to still be mine

I wish that I was nicer to you

I wish I could treat you right

I shouldn;t of put so much pressure on you

 

I shouldn;t of let you stray,

and now that you tossed all your feelings away

My love for you is starting to fade,

i sometimes wonder what it would be like

if that never happened

 

 

Author's Note

#Isuckatpoetry.

#In case it isn't obvious, the pink is the female and the blue is the male.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Your author's note: I disagree with because you do not suck at poetry. You are quite good at it really because I am enjoying your writes.
I really like how you did the point of views with the male and the female and highlighted it with the two different colors, well done with the story in this creating the emotions from both sides, from both genders in this.
Enjoyed, really nice.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a lyric beauty to your bittersweet musings... and I could relate to the questions of what if... knowing that choices we make bring light and shadows into our lives... take us down divergent paths... You write with a pure honesty.

[megan brooks]

I love it!

[Kyle]

I like this. Very creative and cool.

AWW i like this, and you don't suck at poetry. The expressive details you placed in this poem are just right :))