I care.

I care about the world,

I care about your sadness.

I care for those who I’ve never met.

I care for the ones who treat me like crap.

I care too much; it may lead me to hurt.

I care too much, when you don’t care at all.

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

A good message. Nice write :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I can really understand and relate to this. Very nice poem. So relatable and real with the emotions that come with it all.

[-musicfunk-]

yes the message is so true
just a little thought about the word "who" in the 3th stanza
for me can be "whom" ..
=] nice work

[Tamia123]

I like the echo and bulid of of this poem :) Its was good! Thanks for sharing :)

[Barbara Walker]

Funny (as in funny strange) how that works out. The world needs people like you to make up for the ones who don't care at all.

[Aravind]

good progression!

Nice echo effect that perfectly sums up the poem towards the end (with a second care) Clever technique!

Filled with emotion, also I admire the contraction on the last line. "care too much, don't care at all" Wonderful line!!!

Awesome poem! I love it!

[~*Moody Thursday*~]

This poem went from sweet to sour.

[Richy Moon]

Short and to the point. I like it :)

[Jock Engelman]

wow so relateible and understandable

[Reaper]

I can relate to this poem so it makes it way more enjoyable. well done as normal. You have a lot of talent, and you show it off very well.