another love story...

Why can’t you see?

What you truly mean to me?

You helped me become who I wanna be.

We began to love, passionately.

That one special day, you on the ground, on one knee

Years past, now I’m expecting your baby...

I just want to thank you for everything you gave me.

Reviews

[Southern Cross]

A cheerful poem looks even better with colorful font..nice job

[Krista Weiss]

So lovely!

[CandyFirex3]

Its so dear and true. Makes me feel all warm inside. Lovely just lovely!

[rosemary keogh]

Thats lovely. i like it.

[eatmills]

HaHa. You wont be saying that on the day of delivery. The demons can hold no torch to a woman's labourous mouth.

Loved the colour scheme.

[Barbara Walker]

Simple verse with good rhymes, maybe it could be the chorus to a song?

[CrimsonBlaze]

Rhymin scheme worked perfectly and it flowed very well. And the colors were beautiful and contributed well to the poem

[AK]

Very nice! I love the rhyming scheme...

[Tasha]

I liked the use of different colors. This was a beautiful piece. Great write.

[Pencrafter]

I like the way you used different colors. Writing can be visually stimulating as well as intellectually satisfying. The simplicity of statement and concise line is easy to read and understand. Thank you.