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But running off to meet some guy I’ve only met once? Am I insane? What does he see in a school girl like me anyway?

“Oh come on Jaedy, you know you want to!” he pushes.

“Ok, how’s 4pm this afternoon?” I ask, giving in.

“Brilliant, I’ll pick you up from where we met, yeah?”

Before I could even answer, he had hung up on me, I guess he doesn’t take no for an answer.

 

As soon as the school bell rang, I hurried home, and went straight for the shower, sure it was just some guy i met once, but I didn’t wanna smell like a hard day at school, especially if I remember correctly, he smells heavenly, how can I compete with that? Bathe in perfume perhaps?

I decide on wearing my new striped cardigan and my denim tights, with a cute bow-tie headband, inspecting myself in the mirror, I see the time from the corner of my eye.

Crap!

Throwing shoes around the room looking for the perfect pair, I have about 52 seconds before I have to leave, am I going to make it? With only 8 more seconds to go, I finally spot my new boots and race out the door.

I still don’t know why I have to drive there only to leave my car in the car park for a few hours, why can’t I just meet him at the destination? But whatever, maybe he wants to show off his mad driving skills or something. I will never understand the male brain.

I turn into the car park, where we met just a few weeks ago, and there he is, leaning against his car trying to look cool I bet!

When I walk up to him he pretends to fall over in disbelief, because yes I am actually alive, I swear British guys are the funniest! I can’t help but giggle at this, which of course makes him think he’s even funnier. Note to self; don’t give him an even biggest head than he already has.

“Malady, you are indeed still alive! It’s a miracle, I am now a believer” He truly is a gentleman as he opens the passenger side door for me to slip inside next to him.

“Your car is seriously cool!” I can’t contain my excitement, sure I am a girl but I can appreciate a good car every one and a while.

“I know, and do you know why?” He asks, shutting his door, as he is now sitting in the driver’s seat. I fasten my seatbelt, and he does the same.

“No why?”

“Because, this is going to sound really crazy, but this car is owned by this really sexy lad, and his name is called Louis” he says in such an intriguing way that I he almost had me fooled right up until the word sexy.

“You fooled me!” I say laughing as a playfully punch his arm.

“Hey, that’s my good arm” his accent makes everything he says sound a million times cooler in my opinion.

“In fact both my arms are good arms” Now if I wasn’t right beside him and couldn’t see his face, I would probably of thought he was stuck up, but that sparkle in his eye and that smile, gave it away that he is only joking.

“Where are we going?” I ask him.

 “You’ll see soon enough” is all he says to me.

Reviews

[caroline]

Very intriguing. I want to see what happens next. I feel like there is a secret hidden somewhere which caught my interest.

[Donald Cole]

I'm not gonna start reading stories, I'm not gonna start reading stories, I'm not gonna start reading stories, I'm not gonna start reading stories, (But I like this one, and, and .....)
It does draw interest.
Nice
Don

[Raven Starhawk]

Your chapter is another well penned treat. It has the ability to grow on the reader and then before you know it the reader is addicted and wants more.

[Ashley Rivers :)]

OH, my my it keeps getting better.
I usually don't read books on here, but I am really into this one :)
You grab the reader's attention throughout the whole Chapter.
Great job! Ready to read more.

Ashley Rivers-- Dream BIG and you''ll win BIG:)

[mariah]

haha i love it, "Note to self; don’t give him an even biggest head than he already has." very relatedable. thats how i feel if i laugh at a guys joke. anyways, i really like the story and i feel like its going somewhere, although i still dont know exactly where that is, im excited for it. oh, and i could see why some people on here might think louis is a jerk, but i think hes just misunderstood funny guy with a slightly enlarged ego lol. :) good job my friend, and please, please, please, please, keep on writing!
-mariah

[Alex Crow]

Louis does'nt sound like a jerk. can't wait for more. :)

[quixotic_rose]

I love that she doesnt want to feed his ego. the sense of humor is good and im waiting in curiosity to see where he takes her!

[Amanda]

awesome job!!!!

[Victoria Elizabeth]

awesome job!!!! loved it he kinda gives me the feeling of Edward in Twilight!!! Very impressive!

[Meggie]

Very nice :) A really cute and funny chapter, I like Louis' sence of humor and the way he pretended to fall in disbelief :D