Even Though

Even Though

A Poem by Phoenix
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From about year ago

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Even though you’re the only one I see

The fact is you’re not for me.

 

Even though you’re the only one I feel

The fact is this isn’t real.

 

And though I trust you more than I can say

This is really the only way.

 

I’m in love with someone, but I’m not sure who

All I know is that it’s not with you.

© 2011 Phoenix


Author's Note

Phoenix
Frustrating

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Great poem! The rhymes were great and the rhythm went perfectly 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Seems confusing at first, but the last part really brings it home and wraps it up nicely. Your purpose is delayed, but still meaningful :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This sort of fits me, since I just got out of a relationship. I am currently trying to get past the pain, and this sums up what I'm feeling perfectly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phoenix
Phoenix

Zushi, Japan



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