Reactions

Thank You for being the beauty of my life,

And make me smile again.

You are the beautiful truth

And I am the ugly lie.

Love is a beautiful reaction,

I have got your addiction,

I want to follow your directions

Please there be no frictions

This lyrics is not as pretty as you,

I can express my love without curfew.

You thought me meaning of colors,

You were always their as a supporter.

I can listen to you,

I can sing for you

and admire you,

Every night and day I devote to you.

Because Love is a beautiful reaction,

You are an heavenly creation,

Like an Angel's Incarnation,

I don't want this moment to be illusion

My heart beats for you,

My head thinks for you,

In my sleep, I dream for you

Every night and day I devote to you.

So just hold my hands,

I don't want you to escape my sight.

Hug me in Winter

When you admire the starry nights

And I feel your presence over me.

Love is a beautiful reaction,

You are an heavenly addiction,

You are my Soul's completion

I don't want this magical moment to be fiction

Love is a beautiful reaction,

Because a beautiful truth accepted an ugly lie

Because colorless life became rose colored.

Author's Note

Please review. I am open to any complaints and mistakes I had left in the poem.

Reviews

[nightshade]

Great poem. This one is so expressive and meaningful. You seem to put so much thought care and emotion into your writing and that is what makes it so great.

[Miyank]

Thank You Very Much but I m still not worthy of these good words. I will make sure to be more active from now on.

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

This is a really romantic and passionate poem. I loved it! :)

Thank You for being the beauty of my life,
This line is so meaningful and loving. Whoever he is, he sure is lucky! :)

And make me smile again.
Since the previous line says ''thank you for 'being'.....'' so this should be ''And 'making' me......'' to match the tense. The line is meaningful and lovely again. :)

You are the beautiful truth
And I am the ugly lie.
Beautiful lines. Throughout the poem, I loved these the most. :)
Please there be no frictions
I think you missed out a word here between ''please'' and ''there''. Maybe ''let''.

This lyrics is not as pretty as you,
Since you've written ''lyrics'' it should be ''these'' and not ''this'' and ''are'' in place of ''is''. The line is great and reflects the depth of your love.
I can express my love without curfew.
I didn't understand the meaning of this line. Could you please explain this?
You thought me meaning of colors,
If, as I'm assuming, you meant to convey that the person you're talking about feels you're responsible for giving meaning to the colors already present, then I think the sentence should be ''you thought of me as the meaning of colors''.

I can listen to you,
I can sing for you
and admire you,
Every night and day I devote to you.
Wow! These lines are perfect. :)
Because Love is a beautiful reaction,
I liked this line. Talking about love as a ''reaction'' seems to me like an abstract form of art. Nicely thought. Great job! :)
You are an heavenly creation,
I think you've accidentally put ''an'' instead of ''a'' before ''heavenly''.
Like an Angel's Incarnation,
I like the concept here. It's a huge compliment to the one you love and a creative thought as well. :)
I don't want this moment to be illusion
It should be ''an illusion''. The line is simple but powerful. It expresses all the fear and insecurities that every person in love goes through at one time or the other. :)

My heart beats for you
My head thinks for you
In my sleep, I dream for you
Every night and day I devote to you.
These lines are beautiful and passionate as well. Nicely written. :)

So just hold my hands,
I don't want you to escape my sight.
The insecurities and affection are very pronounced here. Well done! :)
And I feel your presence over me.
Since the word is ''presence'' it should be ''around'' instead of ''over''.
You are my Soul's completion
I applaud you for this. :)

Love is a beautiful reaction,
Because a beautiful truth accepted an ugly lie
Because colorless life became rose colored.
Amazing lines. You've done such an excellent job with this poem. Keep up the good work! :)

[Miyank]

"I can express my love without curfew", curfew means time restrictions. This line means I can love you and prove it to you 24 hours a day and 7 days a week without any pause. Thank You for your review.