The heart wants...

The heart wants...

A Poem by Jameel Mohamed

The heart wants, 
What the soul desires. 
It had stayed hungry
For a very long time

The beautiful landscape is now scrapped

The mast is weak
The ship is lost 
The captain puzzled
I am steering towards some coast
To find ray of optimism 
Knowing that nothing is going to be alright, atleast not any sooner. 
Hope the grief fades away
Wish that a blithesome time is on the way

© 2017 Jameel Mohamed


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When we want nothing. We are done. I liked the thoughts and I liked the journey to realistic ending. Thank you Jameel for sharing your excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Your words tell their own story of beautiful landscapes now scraped from existence, of lively ships now lost and wise captains now confused standing before a storm, as they navigate the wild waves of destiny and life.
Thanks for such a lovely journey and I hope only blithesome waves are now to come!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Rye
Wow! very nicely written, I love this write.
The mast is weak
The ship is lost
The captain puzzled
Especially this part. Awesome job!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on December 30, 2017
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Tags: heart, love, romance, breakup, listening, happy, joy, fun, missing, major, realize, blithesome, optimism, beautiful

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Jameel Mohamed
Jameel Mohamed

Manipal, India



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