The Cellar

A Story by Jimmy Greenie

And opening based on a picture I was given in English Image not one based on.

A light blinked into life, illuminating a small patch of the dark room. It shone on a set of damp shoes. It shone on the smart suit of the man holding the lamp. And it shone on the sacks piled at the bottom of the steps...

© 2010 Jimmy Greenie

Author's Note

short. It's only an opening...Maybe I could make a novel out of it...No
Image ~ cyrillatanoso.blogspot.com

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Mrs.Lovett

Nice. Keep it up i wanna read more from you!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Tucker

I love this idea you have of making opening scenes or stories from pictures. It's a really unique idea. Also, the starting to this one is very intriguing, I'd love to see where it goes.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Salvatore Buttaci

I think you should continue and make it a good short story because the beginning is enticing.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on May 2, 2009
Last Updated on April 11, 2010
Tags: cellar, dark

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Jimmy Greenie

my nearest city is too far away to be useful

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Hey peeps. Sorry I haven't been on in a while, but I am back, and I am ready to dive into my 30 odd read requests, although that will take me a veeeery long time. :D more..