The Thaw

Thinking about the past, present and future...

The thaw

A melting of dark

The sun runs rivers wild

Applause

Summer has won

Come one, live a while

Someone 

Give a smile

Put light in the shadows

Young blood

Still runs

In time never traveled 

   -HopingStrong

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Nicely written, simple but with classy! Summer is my favorite season, and you just fast forward me to it! Thanks for sharing and thanks for the add!

[HopingStrong]

Great to hear! And no problem, thank you!

[R Smith]

I think you did remarkable, a refreshing style and an excellent flow that sweeps along the river of my mind, great poem :)

[HopingStrong]

Thank you, just started getting back in to writing. Forgot what a journey it can be!