Not a Poem, Just excited

Not a Poem, Just excited

A Poem by James
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http://tankajournal.com/issue.php?id=8&issue=5

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Just super stoked right now
My two Tanka were published today.

Whoo-Hoo, It's my first time, so be gentle. 
I posted the link to the online journal if anyone is interested. 

© 2017 James



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I'm going to copy these here so I can comment more easily:
Waves carry softly
across the treacherous deep
your midnight message
with two lonely hearts waiting
watching a starry sky fade
and
Chilly water runs
down Lonely Mountain Valleys
wrinkled fingers touch
warm lips beneath crystal skies
meeting in translucent pools.

First one: love the alliteration . . . as a whole, it sums up the scene with vivid imagery. Love the straightforward meaning.

Second one: this is more elusive, it seems, leaving gaps for the reader to fill in . . . good imagination as you paint this image & feeling in the reader's mind.

(I've been off this website for a few months & so I've missed reading you . . . congrats on your being published!)


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

10 Months Ago

I'm super excited about it, Thanks. Welcome back. I took a little break from here too.



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Congrats to you,that's wonderful news;-]

Posted 9 Months Ago


I'm going to copy these here so I can comment more easily:
Waves carry softly
across the treacherous deep
your midnight message
with two lonely hearts waiting
watching a starry sky fade
and
Chilly water runs
down Lonely Mountain Valleys
wrinkled fingers touch
warm lips beneath crystal skies
meeting in translucent pools.

First one: love the alliteration . . . as a whole, it sums up the scene with vivid imagery. Love the straightforward meaning.

Second one: this is more elusive, it seems, leaving gaps for the reader to fill in . . . good imagination as you paint this image & feeling in the reader's mind.

(I've been off this website for a few months & so I've missed reading you . . . congrats on your being published!)


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

10 Months Ago

I'm super excited about it, Thanks. Welcome back. I took a little break from here too.
Congratulations, you obviously feel amazing.. and not surprisingl!!!! Here's to the next time.. and then.. the world is your tanka oyster!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Congratulations!

Did it stoke the writing fire?

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

10 Months Ago

I don't know it's been dead for a while. But it's pretty darned exciting for me. Thanks.
Congrats James! :)
I'm surprised it hasn't happened sooner!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

10 Months Ago

Thanks,again.

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