Haiku 4

Haiku 4

A Poem by James McFadyen

When such hearts are-

broken by love’s malice

they bruise, autumn brown.


© 2015 James McFadyen



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Numbers and form are fine, but the message in the end is what matters and you have achieved that. well Done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A poignant and sad piece with heaps of emotion packed in three lines. Is line one short of a syllable?

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on November 26, 2015
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James McFadyen
James McFadyen

London, Richmond upon Thames, United Kingdom



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Student by day, attemptee-author by night. Studying English and History BA/HONS at the University of Exeter. more..

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