Burnt Soul...

Burnt Soul...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Hell Fire...

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Burnt Soul...

His soul smoldering in an inferno lit life,
flames of sin, ash away unrighteous decisions,

Leaving a crispy soul, to cry black tears of help,
to a GOD, his burnt soul has denied from the beginning of time,

With all bridges completely inflamed,
the scorched soul has no other option but to submit
to his creator and beg for forgiveness of sins,
and help to refurbish his hell fire inner being,

With his knee bent and a melted tongue to confess,
his charred soul, will start his upward assent to repairing,
a lava plagued heart,

With his soul completely embers, he reaches for the heavens
and yells, " FREEDOM " and for the first time in his hell bound life,
he feels just that...



© 2015 Jamestown



Author's Note

Jamestown
ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BELONGS TO CHRIST JESUS!!!

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I was sent here by JT - do you know of him ? ;p

Cool penmanship my friend. Great images.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
ANTO

3 Years Ago

You're welcome !
I wish I had read this piece sooner... :) Such intense emotion delivered with such honesty! I am sorry, that you have ever felt so alone with 'a lava plagued heart'. I wish I could go back to that moment and give you a hug or sometthing!

"With all bridges completely inflamed,
the scorched soul has no other option but to submit
to his creator and beg for forgiveness of sins,"
This is just one of the many strong descriptions that really made me feel this poem.

"Angry Cry" gave me a glimpse of you in moments human. "Burnt Soul" gives me an idea of why you may be scared of loosing control, why you distrust yourself to loose your temper...

For me this was a very strong poem!


Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, ya always two sides to a man:(
I enjoy the nice me and I've been .. read more
Mai L Nissen

3 Years Ago

I don't know what you have done... though, when I said:""Burnt Soul" gives me an idea of why you may.. read more
Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Yes I know it's there but needs to be watched like a hawk
I have an Irish and Italian mix in .. read more
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MCS
A good write
Yet some sinners require longer burning times

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

U R so right! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
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Hi Jamestown. What an outpouring of passion. it is not just the subject of the poem, it is the sincerity!! just a small typo, I think . . .second line . . . (w)ash away, I think?? My hat off to you! alf

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed! PTL
I can feel the heat! What a wonderful blessing to serve a God who forgives and saves from the torments of which you write. Good job James. ~Sharon

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Amen! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
omg this is fantastic. A lava plagued heart! Love this

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Remind me to tell you the true story behind this piece, pretty amazing!
Thanks for checking i.. read more
This is awesome James, I love this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
It is a nice write. Sinners are burnt into a crispy soul. Nice one James

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review!
That is awesome, there is still forgiveness right to the very end.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out! God is so good, not only did he give me life,
he has saved it and.. read more
Very heart wrenching write here. I pictured a man made of ash, on his knees, begging for forgiveness. It's always hard to see or even picture in such a state of desperation. But it is life. We must know that God loves us for who we are and it is our choice to follow him or not. He is such a savior and dependable guide for us and we should never lose faith that he will turn us away if we happen to do wrong. He will always be there, no matter what we do. And he is always willing to forgive those who have gone astray.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

You are absolutely right! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed

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