Burnt Soul...

Burnt Soul...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Hell Fire...

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Burnt Soul...

His soul smoldering in an inferno lit life,
flames of sin, ash away unrighteous decisions,

Leaving a crispy soul, to cry black tears of help,
to a GOD, his burnt soul has denied from the beginning of time,

With all bridges completely inflamed,
the scorched soul has no other option but to submit
to his creator and beg for forgiveness of sins,
and help to refurbish his hell fire inner being,

With his knee bent and a melted tongue to confess,
his charred soul, will start his upward assent to repairing,
a lava plagued heart,

With his soul completely embers, he reaches for the heavens
and yells, " FREEDOM " and for the first time in his hell bound life,
he feels just that...



© 2015 Jamestown



Author's Note

Jamestown
ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BELONGS TO CHRIST JESUS!!!

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Very nice! I love that last verse in particular. Great way to wrap it up. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I can picture your words in my mind. It's absolutely amazing how much depth is in your poetry. The message is beautiful and absolutely true!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Well thank you so much for those kind words, I appreciate your review.
B-blessed my new frie.. read more
Beautiful. Work Sr God is good all the time and all the time God is good !!:-)
Broken Girl

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

You got that right! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
child of God

3 Years Ago

Life church greating we do that after service I haven't said that in a long time it kinda felt good .. read more
Jamestown

3 Years Ago

You are funny, PTL!
Dark soul and simmering embers that don't go away...until
he finds freedom.


Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

This was me before giving my life to Christ! I am a completely different person,
thank God! .. read more
Josie E. Cook M. A.

3 Years Ago

You are welcome!
Fantastic poem - really made me think. Nicely written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Another beautiful poem. A great feeling of redemption to be freed from the sins that burn our souls. Great work and thanks for sharing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I really enjoyed this poem. The way you describe the 'scorched soul' and 'smoldering' really paints a vivid picture and can tell of what we go through and experience in life.

Really well done. :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review. Please let me know when you
put out ne.. read more
The taste of even a little freedom on a tormented soul must be heavenly, so nothing is out of reach if one is willing to work for it even if one is held in hell. I like dark poetry because without the darkness how can we truly appreciate the light, thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

I thank you for your review, I will be looking forward to more of your work.
B-blessed!
A poem about redemption and mercy: this is a complete masterpiece of good work. I admire u james. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks, I feel the same about you! Hey check out sweet sounds. I appreciate your review!
We are all brought to our knees in this life. While on our knees we either acknowledge God with acceptance and repent or we turn away and place blame. A powerful message lies in this one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review and b-blessed!

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