Burnt Soul...

Burnt Soul...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Hell Fire...

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Burnt Soul...

His soul smoldering in an inferno lit life,
flames of sin, ash away unrighteous decisions,

Leaving a crispy soul, to cry black tears of help,
to a GOD, his burnt soul has denied from the beginning of time,

With all bridges completely inflamed,
the scorched soul has no other option but to submit
to his creator and beg for forgiveness of sins,
and help to refurbish his hell fire inner being,

With his knee bent and a melted tongue to confess,
his charred soul, will start his upward assent to repairing,
a lava plagued heart,

With his soul completely embers, he reaches for the heavens
and yells, " FREEDOM " and for the first time in his hell bound life,
he feels just that...



© 2015 Jamestown



Author's Note

Jamestown
ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BELONGS TO CHRIST JESUS!!!

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Well, they say that God is forgiving, and that is all that matters, however you interpret it. I like your idea of a soul smouldering in an inferno of life. If we are honest don't you think we have all been there at some time or other? People who live under the delusion of being perfection probably have a lot to hide.
I think your poem moves very well into the crescendo at the end. Well written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

I thank you for you insightful review, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Great Aunt Astri

3 Years Ago

You are welcome ... keep it up.
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Gee
I am one of the fickle many who only in times of desperation seek help but never offer praise for the good times.Saying that I do admire the depth of feeling and faith people such as yourself have.An interesting read Jamestown

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review and honest words, you and
most do as yo.. read more
Gee

3 Years Ago

You're welcome,take care
Though once your cast into the lake of fire that is the judgement for your denying of Christ and there is no return Better get right or get left PTL

Bill

Posted 3 Years Ago


W R Stowe

3 Years Ago

Amazingly people can also read writes and become aware of each others views on life we as christian .. read more
Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Amen! Thank you Jesus!!
All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus!
W R Stowe

3 Years Ago

AMEN to that
that's all it takes is one shout to god but if you lived for him you wouldn't be in that position
and god will put you in those situations to bring you around

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Absolutely true ! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
 wordman

3 Years Ago

you are welcome james
It often takes catastrophic events for people to start praying. Powerful poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Yes so true, I was this soul! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
 Relic

3 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Wow! Thats a really really beautiful write james! Gods mercy is the greatest and your last line puts it ever so beautifully. Loved it! The imagery of hell is something we all contemplate at times, this was so lucid. Cheers

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
This is really deep, you can feel the weight behind the words, the darkness in it is refreshing, a really good piece! Thanks for your words, Grace :))

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Freedom is a beautiful thing.
Great poem hun! I enjoyed it. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed and Fear the Lord!
hmmm......a very interesting read. Powerful message here. Great work James!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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