Serenity...

Water Flowing Love...

Serenity...

My love for you waterfalls from the high mountain slope
it forms a pool of serenity below awaiting us to elope,

I have only you in my future sights
you and you only are my true and lovely delight,

As the streaming water gently flows
my love for you only grows and grows,

My desire to wife you is as true as
the water is blue and to you I want to remain glued,

Today, tomorrow and forever, I want so much
for you to join me in all endeavors,

I want our love to over flow like water into the ocean
so when we visit our favorite beach we can bottle
our love potion,

This I am positive of what I want and truly need
you my love, when you're not with me my heart
only bleeds,

Let us take this leap of faith off this slope to the
coolness of serenity awaiting us below
completely submitting and seizing control,

We will allow God to seal our fate and deliver it
on a silver platter or better yet a golden plate
today we can start our lives together with a clean slate,

Come my love and join me in serenity
I promise to love you for infinity...

Author's Note

God always provides:)

Reviews

[xbxbzdvdsv]

I really love this poem. You wrote in passion. Great job, best one yet!!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Fran Marie]

A very cool and serene write of loving thoughts cascading down the page..a beautiful worded poem.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, much appreciated:)
b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Beautiful poem James and when you find this woman, she'll surely be lucky to have you. :)

[Jamestown]

So very kind of you, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Welcome. :)

[ANTO]

So much yearning and pure love in this JT. Its impossible not to get lifted up by this fine piece of writing and carried aloft. I love how you keep outdoing yourself. Its class!!
:))

[Jamestown]

That really means a ton! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[ANTO]

its my pleasure JT. I love your tenacity in the field of love - God Bless.
:))

[Sindu]

As mush as love and emotion filled this is, it has a fun atmosphere to it. And very gooey :P
Amazing James. The best of yours i read so far :)
The imagery, the force behind the words and the emotion shines through it :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, I appreciate it:)
b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

An awesome write James... beautiful poem for that special someone... whoever she is. Good work brother!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and let me say HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRO!!!
If I don't I will forget and feel terrible, have a gr8 bday and God bless you
and yours:)

[sinNsincerity]

Yes, all in due time.
Beautiful piece brother!!!

[Jamestown]

Absolutely:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

My love for you waterfalls the high mountain slope
if forms a pool of serenity below awaiting us to elope, I like this line but I think you meant It not if am I correct on this? Loved the poem it steams with blind faith love and ends with the ultimate endless love

Bill

[Jamestown]

Yes sir u are correct, thx :) I appreciate your help, thanks for
checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

Your quite welcome God bless

Bill

[KWP]

very nice sentiment in this piece James - it just drips and drips with the sweetness of good old fashioned love ... nice one XX

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[catwoman]

it's really beautiful..your special one is certainly a lucky one :)

[Jamestown]

All in due time:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!