Tickles my ear...

Spring fever...

Tickles my ear...

The brisk spring breeze tickles my ear,
then a vision of my soul mate magically appears,
as my eyes then puddle with tears, her beauty all
of the sudden disappears,

The games my mind keep playing are no doubt
very draining, but longing for the love of my life
just keeps replaying, when we are finally together
I will realize it was worth all of the waiting, but for
now I continue praying and anticipating,

One day it will be my lady that tickles my ear,
and it won't be a dream because she will always
be near, then my mind will be crystal clear and my
love will be mirrored, all because I had nothing but
faith that God would bring her here...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!

Reviews

[Nini]

Nicely written! Praying for your lady of your dreams to appear.

[Terrence Chang]

Good write James. Its been a while since I dropped by and I am glad I did

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[D.T.]

I absolutely love the last stanza! Really good poem! (:

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

AMEN brother great attitude and great passion penned sometimes you are amazing in your writes God bless

Bill

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome Jamestown

Bill

[nazia]

Love will present itself when the time is ripe.. till then.. let the breeze tickle your ear ;)

[Jamestown]

U R right, thanks again:)

[GreenEyedPoet]

Lovely write. :]
I know it's hard, but be patient, she is coming. God will bring her to you when the time is right.

[Jamestown]

Will do, PTL thanks again!

[Sindu]

such a nicely worded write!
the last stanza was brilliant... flows so smoothly

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if you keep writing the poems about her, she will have to appear sooner or later....for sure.

and poems this well worded? compelling.

[Jamestown]

Just writing for now, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[RiverRei]

Another magnificent piece, my friend. I will always feel terrible that you have to go through this longing with every write and every day that goes by, but I know in my heart (as I'm sure you do, too) that it will all be worth it once you finally meet your soulmate. Another piece of yours makes me want to be that person lol. Thank you for sharing :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Nice way to view the change of the seasons and the nature in it!
Well written overall with metaphor and sound.
Hope present to drive you on.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome! :)