My other 1/2...

My other 1/2...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Someday 1+1will=2...

"

To find someone to live and die with is truly living
and completely worth dying for,

To mess with the rest is is just a test to see if your
ready or capable of the best,

What your heart and mind equates as perfect my
not equal the same sum as some but you see something
that only you were meant to see because you are meant
to be,

I may not see it as clear as you do but I believe I'm not
supposed too, you two are something that was predestined
a true blessing,

Something to live for or die trying, I just pray that mine will
stop hiding because without her I'm slowly dying,

I want to live in her and die with her
I want not to just seek her but be with her
I need to find my sum to this equation
I will continue praying,

My life will always be unanswered
until I find my other half and I know she's
out there looking for me and probably reviewing
pie graphs,

Soon I know that 1+1 will =2 but for now it's just
1 but I'll continue to seek what I perceive as perfection
and hope she is looking in my direction...







© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
All in due time:)
GOD IS GOOD!!!

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I don't think it's about finding, but discovering what is already there. A chance meeting, but to actively look, search leaves nothing to chance. The one thing in life that I feel is worth leaving to chance is when you bump into that one person that will change your life forever, because you already know God arranged the meeting. God bless!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Well said:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
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I believe finding love
Is a blessing
You can take away everything
And just keep that
And i would be the happiest woman alive

JAmes your call out for the one is ever so sweet
May she find you
May you find her
And may you live in that blessing for life

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!
'My life will always be unanswered - until I find my other half and I know she's 0ut there looking for me .. '

This is not only full of hope, longing, and sincerity, but most of all, the willingness to find and hold forever love. It has a ring of innocence somehow and that's so rare these days. In places tis a little muddled (stanza three and four) but maybe that's because of the poet's emotions.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
emmajoy

8 Years Ago

my pleasure..
Oh I see Romeo James was out in full force with this Beautiful romantic write!
Your wording and using the equation so creative and just stunning , made my heart melt especially
" I want to live in her and die with her, "
Love it James :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!
sereenaoutloud

8 Years Ago

You are always welcome James , I love reading your writes!! :)
The first two stanzas had tied me up and caught my attention, those words are really meaningful

To find someone to live and die with is truly living and completely worth dying for,
To mess with the rest is is just a test to see if yourready or capable of the best,

Loved it jimmy, I could feel the longing.
Thanks for sharing.

armin. ...




Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!
Such a sweet longing almost like a prayer.. a promise. A sweet and romantic write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Not written as a prayer but she is always in my prayers:)
Thanks for checking it out and b-bl.. read more
Wow! Very beautiful! Keep on writing writings like this. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Lovely write James. 1+1 will be definitely 2 for you soon. God bless.
I may not see it as clear as you do but I believe I'm not
supposed too, you two are something that was predestined
a true blessing... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Mitali Shah

8 Years Ago

your welcome James :)
WoW!!!
awesome write Sir.....
such sweet longing......
but as you said....all in due time......
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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