A dance in the wind...

A dance in the wind...

A Poem by Jamestown
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The rhythm of life...

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Dancing in the wind...

As the wind blows my blood flows and my
mind goes into a place only God knows,

And yet again we talk as his breathe pierces
my heart with the his tongue and his eyes of fire
scorch me the sun,

Only he knows what message I am to
learn after my soul has been burnt,

It seems like it's always his turn!!!

Why wouldn't it be you see, he and he only
knows the real me,

I no doubt trust thee, but often I close my
eyes and choose not to see even when
he is trying to guide me,

It's so obvious what I need to do
always stay in tune with my God
but easier said then done,when this old
dog wants to run,

I will always dance in the wind he
provides me and always reside with thee
I just pray that he will understand when I
choose to hide from thee,

I venture but never far enough for him to give
up on me and I will never give up on him
cause one day I will I literally be dancing with thee
in utter glee completely free...

© 2015 Jamestown



Author's Note

Jamestown
ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO CHRIST JESUS!

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A nice write......

I am not a god fearing man like you, but i appreciate your poetic intentions with this piece. We all have the things we believe in, what we choose to have faith in. Your poem is evidence of your faith in God, and it is a well written piece. While i may argue with your reasoning, i cannot argue with your writing.

A heartfelt poem of faith and trust. Nice work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Very nicely & creatively written! I like it when "God" messages are intertwined with "real life" messages . . . showing instead of telling, as with the best writing. I also approach my God friendship as a dance . . . a work in progress . . . an ever-present part of my days . . . rather than a habitual ritual. You've expressed how it can be when we are simply ourselves with God. I always say, why pretend, becuz He knows our every thought anyway! I also like the way you remind us all that we are stubborn fools & we often forget to follow or to learn our lessons along the way. But it's all good. He's patient.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Hopeful and beautiful words my friend.
"I venture but never far enough for him to give
up on me and I will never give up on him
cause one day I will I literally be dancing with thee
in utter glee completely free... "
All of us hope for the above lines. We hope we find our way to a better place. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure to read your work my friend and you are welcome.
What can I say another amazing write Mr James.
Always a huge fan of your work.
What's not to like? your work has great meaning to every poem every time.
Your rhyming is flawless and perfect.

This poem was no less spectacular.
Its great you have such strong faith and belief in god, after all we all have to believe in something don't we?
I loved the ending, it was just like the perfect ending.
Wonderful poem james, please keep writing always :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
cimmy wuv xxxooo

1 Year Ago

Your welcome James anytime :)
Great write Mr James. Its been a while since I read your work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is a great reaffirmation to and everlasting relationship and in your case definitely God.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Jamestown This is another excellent poem of yours. I love how you talk about God like He is present and active on our lives because He is. Your faith uplifts my spirit once again. All glory to God.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

PTL:)
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Good one JT. We all tend to run away and hide from God from time time. I could relate to your work because i'm doing exactly that these days. One thought that came to my mind as i was reading the verse was that it could be an excellent rap.
All glory and praise be to Christ Jesus.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
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Amazing!, sometimes we have our high and low points in life where we either turn to God or run away, i love these lines

' I venture but never far enough for him to give
up on me and I will never give up on him '

It is so very true, in the end we always come back to God and through his mercy he accepts us:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Completely agree, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
This is no doubt one of your best works yet Jamestown. I love your writing and I hope you don't mind me saying this but be blessed. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!
Juliespenhere.

6 Months Ago

Liked this very much keep on writing

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