If I could I would...

If I could I would...

A Poem by Jamestown
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But I know who can:)

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If I could...

If I could take every ounce of pain away,
If I could make everyday a day in heaven,
If I could answer all of your prayers,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If I could make you understand that his eyes
are always on you the sun and moon,
If I could die for you to make sure you have eternal life,
If I could guide you to paradise,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If I could make all your wrongs right,
If I could bring light to your dark nights,
If I could make you experience perfection,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If you want his number,
it's 1- 800 THE LIFE
he's been longing for your call...




© 2015 Jamestown



Author's Note

Jamestown
GOD IS GOOD!

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if i could ,i would,nice peaceful write
and if i could,i would..

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Strong, kind and gentle words.
"If you want his number,
it's 1- 800 THE LIFE
he's been longing for your call..."
All of us need help. Kind words, concern and feeling needed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 2 Years Ago


Your spirituality shines in this write...as well as your compassionate heart. So lovely. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
...and all the time! I love the message bro! What we need from people has got only but one source... and GOD IS OUR SOURCE!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

I completely agree, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Excellent message James. If I could I would... but, I know WHO did, and to him I give all my praise. Thank you my friend. Cheers!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

PTL thanks again , b-blessed!
Hey Jamestown, back after a long time.. Good to see you're still producing some great poems, totally loved this one!

Posted 3 Years Ago


A captivating work. It seNds a positive message. Man may have good intentions but only God has the ultimate power for good

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
and the beauty is all you have to do is ask and believe...wonderful write and thanks for sharing...blessings to you always...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Another wonderful write. A wake up call to people who are dazed and confused, who are in the darkest pits of their emotions...we can only support our loved ones, but they have to realize it on their own...the need to live among living and treasure every moment of it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

agreed!Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
How many good things we'd like to do to the people, because our hearts burn of love, faith and understanding about the spiritual life, our future after death and so on... How many good things... This poem places this fact with art and sensibility! May God bless you my brother and, if we go deep in our consideration we will realize that, through this poem, you made already something very good to all of us! Be blessed, a great hug from Brazil!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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Jamestown
Jamestown

Denver, CO



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Fun, spontaneous, outgoing, God fearing man. Enjoy reading and have a passion to write. PTL. ... more..

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