If I could I would...

But I know who can:)

If I could...

If I could take every ounce of pain away,
If I could make everyday a day in heaven,
If I could answer all of your prayers,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If I could make you understand that his eyes
are always on you the sun and moon,
If I could die for you to make sure you have eternal life,
If I could guide you to paradise,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If I could make all your wrongs right,
If I could bring light to your dark nights,
If I could make you experience perfection,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If you want his number,
it's 1- 800 THE LIFE
he's been longing for your call...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!

Reviews

[armin]

Very nicely written ,
the composition is great
and your eternal faith.

Loved it.

armin. ...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

God is great my friend! Another awesome write... perfect message and more importantly you don't write it just to write you write because it's truth from your heart, mind and soul. Loved it!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[E G TEN]

Hey JT, always enjoy your writing my friend very beautiful, you are a Godsend. Keep fighting the good fight for I know someone who's always by your side. Thanks for sharing, This is my favorite of yours so far ! :-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[fattycbreezy52]

Wow all compositions of yours primarily circle around HIM.This is the sign of a strong faith.Never let it die and an amazing articulation in poetic words of your feelings.Great work!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I speak to him with daily reverence ...he knows me well. We've been pretty tight since he took my Dad away from me when I was only 6 years old.

This place needs more poetry like this to adorn its halls! Many blessings, James!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[guy drori]

Wow...liked the punch line in the ending. The word "If" really gave a strong tone to the poem.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[guy drori]

thanks ... you too

[Mitali Shah]

If I could make all your cries fade away,
If I could bring smile to your sad face,
If I could make you experience happiness in every moment......

Wow James superb write up dear. Thanks for sharing wonderful blessing message. It shows your concern and kindness towards people and your loved one's God bless :) loved it

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[~]

What a blessing you are my friend. You're an encouragement and a string witness of your faith.
May the Bread of Life always satisfy you. :)

[Jamestown]

I only fills my stomach for now, but one day the filling will be like
eating chocolate and pizza and ice cream and skittles and I think
you know what I'm saying:) etc.......

[andrew mitchell]

I know you would my friend but the person you said can is not doing his job too well! How bout applying Jamestown. put the can back in can and do it! lol I loved this write and I know he's busy!!

[Jamestown]

Thanks my friend I hear what your saying, I can I will do his will and fail miserably trying, lolread moreThanks my friend I hear what your saying, I can I will do his will and fail miserably trying, lol
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

no you would not fail, you have a heart of gold

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Thank you for sharing this poem, James. I know you would, my friend, well done. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!