Sun Smiling...

Sun Smiling...

A Poem by Jamestown
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The Summer Sun...

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Sun Smiling...

Today the suns summer rays brings
a bright smile to my face,

I feel the warmth of Gods good grace
and understand that time is not to waste,

As I embark on my day,I first pray
and give thanks to the Lord for this beautiful
day and his warm embrace,

With that being said "I just wish it was the Cali
sun that was giving me this hug, I am in Colorado
where the sun is referred to be smug,

The Coloradans love their Rocky Mountains,
and I don't blame them but I love my Cali sun,
I find all my fun in the sun, beaches and babes,
not necessarily in the Denver haze,

But today the sun is smiling and I'm a mile
closer I feel it's heat and am taken aback by
this Colorado treat,

So as of now I will join the radiant sun in it's
smiling, shinning, beauty but I will day dream
of Cali and the beach, later today, tomorrow and
everyday until my return, I long to be where my
heart truly belongs...

© 2015 Jamestown



Author's Note

Jamestown
God is good!

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WOW. you are amazing. Maybe you could give me some pointers. I not good at poem. Keep doing what you are doing.
GOOD WRITING!!!!!


Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Nothing as nice as returning home. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Truly sweet write about missing the place you call home.
I dont blame you i love the heat and the sun to.
Home is where the heart is and your heart is in Cali. :)
Great write i enjoyed it :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your right,
home is where the heart is:)
B-blessed!
cimmy wuv xxxooo

1 Year Ago

Your welcome james :)
loved it! are you from California? a friend of mine is from Long Beach.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and yes Long Beach as well, b-blessed!
This is a nice piece about remembering home but still finding beauty in the place that you are. Like life, we must find peace where we are at and remember fondly where we have been. Good work as always. God bless brother.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed sis!
Having a gorgeous day there :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
A beautiful write here and I can feel your longing to be "home in Cali." I am on the opposite side of the spectrum. We moved FROM Florida where I grew up TO Colorado and I just LOVE it here in the mountains! ~SP

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Im living in the DU district and find I so lovely:)
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Beautifully penned and home is truly where the heart is....today I wrote about the Rocky Mountains....and you have shared so eloquently your love of Cali. Thank you for sharing your talent. Nicely done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, if you enjoy Colorado writing check out a river runs through
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I live in California and I know what sun you are talking about! :) we've had rain for the past three days. :) super happy though. This poem is sweet and lovely. I like how you incorporated God in this. :) beautiful work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
that's a powerful emotion to feel the need to be home again where as you say the heart belongs, a dream i know so well :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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