A River Runs Through...

A River Runs Through...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Flowing Love...

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A River Runs Through...

I am mesmerized by the overwhelming beauty of the great Colorado River,

So powerful, but yet so pleasant and also great in stature,

As I soak in all of it's glory I keep imagining my heart being so similar in so
many ways,

The water raging throughout the river walls, reminds me of my cascading love
flowing from my heart throughout my friends and family,

Sometimes even overflowing on to the dry land as my love will also do to people
whom are unaware of why I love them,

I am proud to have this river as I see it running through my body and pray I will find
a way to preserve it,

God knows that love is the answer to everything, but God also knows that hate is always
present trying to dam that beautiful flowing river a.s.a.p.

I am aware of it's presents and I try with every once of strength to let my love flow freely
even when family, friends, work, or even everyday passerby's try to beaver a home in the
middle of my bloody river,

So I encourage you too also allow your love to flow freely like the oh so powerful but pleasant
Colorado River,

I am positive that there are many out there that really and truly need to get wet,
a river runs through you too...

© 2015 Jamestown



Author's Note

Jamestown
ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO GOD!!!

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We've forgotten that it's nature that nurtures us, fills our holes, and creates abundance for us to love ourselves and others. Lovely poem.

Posted 9 Months Ago


James, this is such a peaceful and inspiring write... I loved how you deeply projected the beauty of a flowing river that can be true to our whole self too... Love is only answer to any hardships, as the Bible says "God is love" and He lives within us through love... Thank you very much for this spiritual and uplifting write...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Nothing like a running river's water to cleanse the body and the spirit. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Really enjoyable read. And the wonderful reverence with the river and love and God, truly wonderful.
I love this part:
Sometimes even overflowing on to the dry land as my love will also do to people
whom are unaware of why I love them,

A BIG well done from me!
Thank you. :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I loved this another cleaver wayof relating the feelings inside you to a flowing river.
These poems of yours remind me a little of my own poem One with the rain.
All kinds of water i feel can be related to emotions and the way we feel inside. Whether its a raging river or the all powerfull ocean or the rain.
I love your work always great job :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks again, I am definitely going to read the poem you mentioned:)
B-blessed!
cimmy wuv xxxooo

1 Year Ago

Your welcome.
And thank you :)
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Liz
Lovely! A true inspiration from nature

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jamestown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
A very beautifully written piece!
Loved the metaphor of the flowing river.
Thank you for sharing such a warm and insightful piece


Posted 1 Year Ago


A nice piece. I loved how you added sections about the river flowing like love, and hate trying to dam it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Let's spread unending love like the Colorado River that flows freely. Love this poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nicely expressed and the comparison is good;}

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Thanks again and b-blessed!

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Added on July 19, 2015
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