I AM ALONE

My Lonliness

Everybody is there but nobody cares

Many things to share but no listeners are there...

Still lonely, still shy

Who cares when I cry ?

Relations are many

True are few,

Everyone is mine

But I am lonely without you...

             DEAR FRIEND,

                      I AM ALONE.....

Reviews

[Girl With A Pen]

Wow...the striking emotion put into this poem is amazing. There is a difference is being alone and being lonely.
"Everyone is mine
But I am lonely without you..."

You can have everyone you want in your life but when it comes to the one person you want the most everyone else makes you feel alone. Wonderful poem! Loved it

[Adam Adams]

friends stir fun with life, & render some ecstatic ingredients of fascinating to heart as well, but sometimes, even in the full crowd of people, we're all lone... & that's what... aches the most 'cause... everybody's lone in life & has to walk the moment. quite deep & very worth-reading.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks Adam for ur time reading...
hv a gd day!!

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Once again, a lovely poem.

This is a kind of companion piece to your first poem. The difference being that the best friend is no longer around. Again, your rhyme is very good and consistent throughout, helping to create real emotion and depth to your words.

Another stark but sweetly innocent poem. Poignant and one that tugs on the heart. Well Done.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you once again!!!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Someone means everything. Their smile is your happiness and in their tears is your pain.
"Relations are many, true are few"
So well said.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you a lot sir for the kind review...
I appreciate as usual...

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Man, you have a way getting real emotion behind your writing. All you need is some piano music behind this one and here come the waterworks. Once again, thanks for sharing. N.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for this musical and pleasing review... thanks a lot for the support!!! (smiles) : )

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. Hard to feel alone and be surrounded by loneliness and sadness. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for reading...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[hcarson]

this one i truely relate to, i have a large family but it seems there is a divide that has developed and one side are vile and attacking the other..so pointless. well done, another heartfelt poem

[Anindita Janhabee]

I am happy that you liked it..

[SuspectGray]

I enjoyed this sadly sweet poem. It doesn't take the reader long to examine his/her own friend situation.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks for the beautiful review...

[Inject Positivity]

Deep emotions with provoking thoughts....Beautifully portrayed the loneliness of the speaker being without his/her frnd.....Full ratings mate.....

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for reading...

[Raahi]

dear friend, the imagery of your thoughts and then putting them into words is awesome. I can feel the emotions of person behind these words. well crafted poem and it depicts a reality which is part of everyone's life.considering your age, it's great to hear such good poem from you.
hope you continue writing such poems.
Raahi

[Anindita Janhabee]

Heartily thanks dear friend, I am really happy that someone could understand my feelings by entering inside my poem... Thanks for your wonderful review and I'll try my best to write more poems and share...