Deep thoughts of you

Deep thoughts of you

A Poem by Anindita Janhabee
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You and only you...

"
In the darkness of my heart,
You appeared as a candle
Just like a star,
In the night sky...
On my face of gloom,
You appeared as a smile
Just like a sunset,
By the bluish river...
In my pages of diary,
You appeared as a poem
Just like the luckiest pen,
For a writer...
In my imaginative thoughts,
You appeared as feelings
Just like the sweet dreams,
Of a dreamer...
Through my lips,
You appeared as songs
Just like the notes,
Coming out of a piano...
In my every glimpse,
You appeared as love
Just like the seven colours,
Glowing in every rainbow...
In my life,
You appeared as sunrise
Just as happiness,
After sorrow...

© 2016 Anindita Janhabee


Author's Note

Anindita Janhabee
This is for the first time, a poem about a special and unique feeling which moved around in my heart. It disturbed me so much so I put it on the page of my diary...

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I like the colors, they are quite colorful
for colors

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the descent review... I appreciate a lot...
A very lucky person whom this poetry addresses as an inspiration of life.

Good thoughts!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thank you once again... your words mean a lot ...
A beautiful rainbow of words, kaleidoscopic in colour and in sentiment. We all need a rainbow to appear after the storm, great work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading...
I am speechless after reading this

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

I am glad...
WoW!!!!
beautiful.......i like the play with colours.........
a heartfelt dedication.......
images....metaphors........awesome.......
well grafted dear poet......
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thank you Pushkar for your valuable time reading my little work...
I am glad you are my frien.. read more
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Hehehehe...Disturbed you? It's only love :)

A beautiful feeling, that gives a lot of joy, strength, peace to the person. .a purpose, an intoxicating drink, and that perfect, most beautiful drunkenness :)

well penned. He's a lucky dude for sure :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

thank u for the sweet review...
D

7 Years Ago

always a pleasure reading you (:
Wow! that's something really a true lover can scribble in loneliness for sure....
The flow, the rhymes, the feelings, the imagination everything seems awesome about this poem.

Great Work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thank you!!! Nice profile pic Skyfall...
Writer at last! Sky ~

7 Years Ago

Most welcome Miss :)
These are words of a heart that is in love. Wonderful use of nature and abstract things to describe the feelings that you are going through.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

thanks for the review sir...
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I liked the metaphors you used here..
I enjoyed reading this... *Smiles*

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

thanks for reading and reviewing dear...
Unknown Poet

7 Years Ago

Welcome :)
awesome poem ..... you have perfectly put down your feelings in this poem..... loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

thanks for enjoying...

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Added on January 11, 2016
Last Updated on October 9, 2016
Tags: Heart, brightness, smile, feelings, imagination, dreams, songs, rainbow and love.

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Anindita Janhabee
Anindita Janhabee

Jeypore, Odisha, India



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