Lonely days...

Loneliness all around...

Today the sun shines bright
But I live in dark
I miss the one
Who had created a spark...
Though I thank God
For granting my wish
Of removing away my guilt
And holding them to relish..
Life turns cruel
Many a times to me
Yet I manage to handle
Even though no one could see..
Today I only have memories
Which perhaps feel like
Stars shining in the night sky
And again those feelings strike..
Days passed away
In writing stories and folks
And the night with
philosophies and long talks..
Although a distant friendship
Where differences are a lot
Still friendship is always precious
No matter we meet or not..
Not a single time did we meet
So we are best friends unseen
In front of the laptop
I always remained keen..
Badly wanted help
Positively got your favour
Always wanted myself
In the best way to endeavor..
Someone entered into your life
An angel whom you praised
Fading away this friendship
Again bad luck I described...

Author's Note

I wrote this for a special friend, when we were out of touch for one month... You do know who you are...

Reviews

[Ashish]

"Someone entered into your life
An angel whom you praised
Fading away this friendship
Again bad luck I described..."

that bad luck really take out my heart, something really to be noticed in the whole poem.

[Anindita Janhabee]

omg so many reviews from u.... thank u so much !!!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Net is indeed a miracle. You find friends who you would never have known otherwise. I hope everything stays beautiful between your friend and you.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you sir....

[D]

Oh the heartwrenching pain of losing someone without actually losing them. You talk but the glow is missing from the chat, then it stops...The happy chirping birds become silent...

Very well penned.

"Of removing away my guilt" my two cents...maybe remove the word "away " from that line. But really nothing to worry about.