Apart and Depart

Apart and Depart

A Poem by Anindita Janhabee

Being apart,
I met you
Being apart,
You admired me
Together we created a strong bond called 'love'...
Being apart,
You touched my heart
Being apart,
I read your eyes
Not in my wildest dreams was love possible to me...
Being apart,
You kissed me
Being apart,
I missed you
Both of us promising to be together forever and a little more than forever...
Being apart,
You reside in my heart
Being apart,
I was your soulmate
As we dreamt of our house of love far away...


******

During departure,
You took away my heart
During departure,
You gifted me with tears
Breaking all the promises made before days...
While departure,
I called you back
While departure,
You didn't even turn to me
Leaving me all alone once again...
While departure,
I kept sobbing
While departure,
You began to like her
Making me worse than I was ever...

__ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ __

Living a lifeless life without you
You won't come back, it's true...
How to smile and blush without you,
How to lead a lonely path without you...
How to take peaceful breath without you,
How to live a life without you.......

© 2016 Anindita Janhabee



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I like how you expressed it all in a flowing way of emotions and proper words of contrast. Excellent...:)................

Posted 9 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

9 Months Ago

Thank you sir... for your warm words....
always appreciated...
Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

You are welcome muchly. ....:::)))))
This is really touching and emotional. It's weird to witness the sudden transformation of feelings and people- time is a great healer but a demon too. What's fatally wounded is the feelings and emotions sealed with constancy. The chariot of time crushes them mercilessly...because the only thing constant is change itself. I loved the emotions flowing like a cascade through the words, they were heart-warming in the beginning but emotional when nearing the end.
Thanks for sharing such a simple and beautiful piece.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your wonderful words and precious time.....
much appreciated....
The dark story

9 Months Ago

it's a pleasure. :)
I didn't enjoy the repeating so much. Not fun of songs or writers who do this.
But I approve of how you manage to sound smooth and I could... I WANTED to keep going~! The emotion seems so raw and you can really tell how this experience impacted you.
it is breathtaking and amazing thanks for sharing this piece with the reader!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

10 Months Ago

I appreciate your comments... always welcome... And thanks for the read...
Its the fact...loved ur poem for its reality...we apart depart we exit enter life is a journal in between the two words...

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have no words to review these 3 departments of actions n deep feelings... I undergone all of these feelings and still trying to overcome... I can advice one thing for you .. if he just cheated U in that case don't spoil urself in his remembrance.. U will b having a strong reason to getover he cheated U for somebody else. Perhaps if your both faiths seperated U and he too strongly feel U ... i strongly appreciate you..

Posted 10 Months Ago


Uday Bhasuthker

10 Months Ago

Most welcome.... Sorry for misspelled words in this review..
Anindita Janhabee

10 Months Ago

Nothing to worry ........
it's always a pleasure reading ur reviews....
Uday Bhasuthker

10 Months Ago

Thank you :)
Being apart you wrote so well,
Had to review and my writings fell.

Very good thoughts about soul mates and though so far they are so near.

Posted 10 Months Ago


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it is very sad..you have written it in a beautiful way that seems I am riding a journey of a chapter of life..but being a friend , can wish for you that you should have all the justice and a right one in your life..

Posted 11 Months Ago


this is really good !!!!! such an interesting thought !!!!, very well constructed...
thanks for sharing....

Posted 11 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

11 Months Ago

Thank you my dear frnd!!!😃
The phase of love, separation and the agony is beautifully expressed in this write Anindita!
Presentation in sections and repeatition of the phrases made your write impactful..
Though in the second section,the words while departure looked a bit odd combination to me because while is not a preposition so the combination was not going down well for me. I think during departure is okay or at departure also can make a better sense..this is just an opinion.
Nevertheless, your write write is touching..
Thanks for sharing..



Posted 11 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

11 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for your suggestion dear writer...
Your words are always encouraging.......
read more
Being apart,
It was not easy
Being apart,
You must be busy
Being apart,
Still I wish lots of happiness for you
Being apart,
I am incomplete without you..

Nice work :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Ashish

11 Months Ago

Of course ... May be it is only her ...because of whom I am writing
Anindita Janhabee

11 Months Ago

so nice.... Keep writing....
true love never dies... have hope ... have faith.....
Ashish

11 Months Ago

Yeah ..waiting for twist in the movie ..let's see when it comes

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