To my Dad...

To my Dad...

A Story by Anindita Janhabee
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Not actually a story... just my feelings...

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Dear Dad,
It has been so long that I have written something for you... It's your day today and you do know how special you are to me...

It's father's day...
You are my father, philosopher, and the only love of my life...
Some children are really blessed to have got awesome fathers. And I m one of those children.

All that I am today is because of you,
All that I have got, is for you and
All that I will be, I will owe it to u...
If I start writing a poem, it will continue till pages... A story is enough to make you bored... And about novel, I haven't qualified yet. So apart from all these I want to write something simple, you may call it a text-

When I cry, I want you to support me.
When I laugh, I want you to join me.
When I fall, I want you to hold me.
When I get confused, I want you to make me understand.
When I get angry, I want you to make me calm.
When I get exhausted, I want you to create patience in me.
When I write something new, I want you to criticize the most.
When I achieve something new, I want you to make the best compliment.
And when I feel lonely, I just want you to be besides me...

And as you have fulfilled all my wishes, a big THANK YOU...

And a happy Father's day!!!

With lots of love and respect..
Yours lovely daughter...

© 2016 Anindita Janhabee



Author's Note

Anindita Janhabee
This isn't a story but something which I had written for my Dad on Father's day...
I wish everyone gets a special dad like mine....

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you made me emotionally twisted.
loved this one...


Posted 4 Months Ago


Yeah I got my dad same, he is my inspiration, hero, my actor, and love you dad in simple.....
That's what I can say for any dad.And am happy Anindita for you and your dad.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the review...
This is so heartwarming! I love the way you described your father using sinple worda which have a big impact. Very touching

Posted 10 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

10 Months Ago

Am so very glad you liked my work and it touched your heart....
thanks for the visit...
I am sure your dad is very proud of you.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

11 Months Ago

I hope so... Haha... thank you so much for reading!!!!!!!!
So simple yet so sweet. Love the way you create your poem...


Posted 12 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

12 Months Ago

Thanks yaar.......
This is a beautiful & thoughtful tribute to your dad. Love the way you've used plenty of details rather than generalities. We can really feel the way you feel & why you feel this way. Since I had a very abusive father, I used to hate reading anything about fathers. But now I can finally enjoy the idea of what it must be like to have a father like this. You are indeed very blessed my friend (((HUGS)))

Posted 1 Year Ago


Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

Yep!!! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.... I'm glad!!!😃
This is a really beautiful and heartfelt poem! Your dad would certainly be really happy reading this. Not all good parents--as far as I know--get the opportunity of being thanked by their children when they grow up. Loved it--KEEP WRITING!!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

So true words... yes, I have obviously grown up but I'm the same cute kid for my Dad and will always.. read more
Devanshi

1 Year Ago

You are always welcome!
Your Father will be proud reading this. There is always a special bond between Mother-Son and Father-Daughter. You justify it quite well here.

Good job.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

Very true... thank you for the visit...
I really must appreciate the way you poured out your feelings...
this poem is arguably the best gift for you father

Posted 1 Year Ago


Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your first review to my writing... I am glad you liked it....
Anindita, you are, without a doubt, one of the most talented young writers I have ever read in my entire life. This is beautiful! What a wonderful way to honor your father! Your writing is so pure and angelic. XOXO

Posted 1 Year Ago


Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much ma'am... it's my pleasure getting your sweet and warm review.... thanks a lot!!!

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