💙All that matters is Friendship💜

💙All that matters is Friendship💜

A Poem by Anindita Janhabee
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My first dedication to Mirror...

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For my mirror...

Talking with pleasure
Smiling for each other,
Just lost in mirrorship
No matter how we go deep
Because all that matters is friendship...

Unseen beings being together
Sparkling like one lamp for other,
Twinkling like stars
No matter what the scars
Because all that matters is friendship...

Discovering untold secrets
With relation of trust without quests,
Preaching for peace together
When distance doesn't matter
Because all that matters is friendship...

Some anger and some fun
Just like shadow with sun,
Fighting and then mending
No matter how much goes the waiting
Because all that matters is friendship...

Thinking and writing
One - moment poems so charming,
Just our ways of spoiling ink
No matter what others do think
Because all that matters is friendship...

Rubbing the sleepy eyes so keen
And sticking onto the screen,
Waiting for each other's replies
No matter what bond it ties
Because all that matters is friendship...

Collaboration of novel so amazing
Like our hobby of star - gazing,
Although it's so magical
No matter what's intangible
Because all that matters is friendship...

I wish our relation
Stays blessed with passion,
And forever it does shine
No matter what the time
Because all that matters is friendship...

© 2016 Anindita Janhabee



Author's Note

Anindita Janhabee
It took me not more than 15 minutes to write this piece because it was just around my heart...
I hope you liked my little and honest work.....

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The words are so moving. All that matters is friendship. That line will stick in my head for a while I'm sure.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

9 Months Ago

Ah!!! thank you and I'm glad for writing such a line..... Thanks for your visit...
Chris A Jones

9 Months Ago

you are so very welcome.
i liked it. the way you described friendship in such words was beautiful.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your visit.... am glad you liked it..
I like your description of friendship & sharing . . . your word-crafting is nicely vivid in many places, especially when describing how it feels to be texting until one's eyelids droop. I'm not crazy about using the same line over & over & over as you do at the end of every stanza. If you must repeat so many times, at least try making each instance into something new & a little different, with a little imaginative twist of words. Otherwise it just gets monotonous & we stop reading it all the way thru.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the warm review... will definitely keep in mind your word while doing next tim.. read more
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A true friendship is being frank to each other and nothing can be more frank than a mirror

Posted 10 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

10 Months Ago

so true... thnks a lot for ur time....
Cheers for the friendship! Would like to use this for my friends on special days!



Posted 10 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

10 Months Ago

Of course why not....
glad that you liked this...
All that matters is ultimately friendship. Very nicely written and come to think of it, a mirror is our most intimate companion

Posted 10 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

10 Months Ago

Very true sir, and yes, Mirror forms rarely... Here, mirror is my best friend as we both are 99 per .. read more
True friendship remains forever. Times will change, places may no longer be the same but one can always count on a true friend.
Great poem. keep it up :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

10 Months Ago

Thanks a lot... yep, very true words... wrote for a best friend.... who's my mirror....
thank.. read more

Unseen beings being together
Sparkling like one lamp for other,
Twinkling like stars
No matter what the scars
Because all that matters is friendship...

This is my favorite part...friends mean a lot to me

Posted 11 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your first visit... Yes, friends are like stars... you can't see them all the .. read more
Another beautiful piece, friend. This is quite an interesting poem......, i must say, its really heart touching......
I'm giving it a thumbs up....

Posted 11 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

11 Months Ago

Thanks for your time reading...
Ani, I love the pureness of your poems. I read and smile so big because your poetry isn't flamboyant, it's just simple and honest and full of life. I love how you've described friendship here; every part made my heart swell. All that matters is friendship between people. :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

11 Months Ago

Oh ma'am.. I'm so glad for bringing a smile to u.... that's enough for me... no publishing or sellin.. read more

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Jeypore, Odisha, India



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