Come let's hide...

Just my way to imaginations

Come let's hide...
Across the ocean
Beyond the sea,
Beneath the infinite sky
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
Top of the mountain
Under the tree,
By the seashore
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
On the moon
Folding hand to knee,
Behind the sun
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
Towards the fields
Setting the hearts free,
Underneath the rainbow
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
Along the lake
With utmost glee,
Up the clouds
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
Above the hills
With three words to agree,
Beside the waterfall
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
Around the valley
Blessed by the almighty,
Inside a sweet little hut
Just you and me.

Author's Note

Deep into my imaginations...

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Deep and beautiful. Seems like reading a song of two...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks again...
glad you liked...

[An owl on the moon]

There is a tender, beautiful joy that sings through your words. For those who love this deeply, it is pure joy to find that escape to a sacred place to be alone as one. So wonderful!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot sir for your support and encouragement. .

[Arun MP]

Written amazingly well. Nice one.
Regards,
Arun

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for your visit...

[horizon]

Hey...it's a sweet little poem by you...I enjoyed it while reading...and also shows that how love birds want to spent there time together;)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot my bestie...
And I've sent you my email ID...

[horizon]

I got it...I. Really missed u yarr and WC

[Anindita Janhabee]

missed u too... always talking about u with my frnds here in WC...

[horizon]

Ohh really..why..u knw I can't handle such talking going on abt me...

[horizon]

😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

[Anindita Janhabee]

well, nothing to worry coz I mostly talked abt u with my best frnd in WC...
silly girllllllll....

[horizon]

Aree I am not worried yarr...

[Anindita Janhabee]

haan ji... mujhe pata hai...
miss silly, sometimes I can also act silly ok...

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Anindita! This poem is so innocent and lovely. I really like it. It had me smiling. I love the repetition. Keep writing, my friend. You have great talent.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for the kind words my dear...

[Author Gus]

You are a good writer. I'm nitpicking and throwing balls at walls here but if it were me I would probably play around with to either the first or last line in each stanza. Being that there are seven stanza's I would recommend having three different lines that you rotate. The first intro would be used 3 times and the second and third twice.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for the review and suggestions sir...
I'm glad for your visit. I'd rather work on it sometime later when I am in full spirit to make it better with time....
Thanks again...

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

I love all of the different ways you incorporated where to hide in nature with the person you love.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot dear writer for the warm visit........ thank you...

[barleygirl]

All in all, I love the way you've crafted this message to suggest many of my favorite ways to go hide, which is in nature. I'm not crazy about how the first & last line of every stanza is repeated . . . a bit too much repetition for my liking . . . but this could be played with a little to create some variations so it doesn't all start sounding the same over & over. I really love the 3 central lines of every stanza, tho. Good creativity!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for sharing your views...Always appreciated...

[matrixmark]

Vivid images, great imagination, just such a beauitfully well writtten and heartwarming piece. If only we could escape and hide away into these wonderful places.

Mark.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much sir for your visit...means a lot to me...

[Aaishani]

WONDERFUL POEM WELL WRITTEN...KEEP IT UP

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for your visit....

[Aaishani]

MY PLEASURE..