Sun

Sun

A Poem by JanieB
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Haiku

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Sun

 

Sunshine beams on me

The heat is quite amazing

I love the feeling.

© 2010 JanieB


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Oh this makes me wish it were sunny right now. I like what it is saying and I certainly agree with it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


And so do I
your poem is amazing bright
warm sunshine on face

Posted 8 Years Ago


Fan of haiku! I really like this. A well written poem about the sun. I love the sun as well. It's warm rays heat my heart for sure!
Awesome write!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is really great! I can't say I agree with the statement, though. XD I hate the sun and its brightness and its heat. XD

Posted 8 Years Ago


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very uplifting and positive little haiku!! I liked it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nice write :)

Peace
Robin

Posted 8 Years Ago


Was half expecting the traditional japanese twist at the end, like

but all things are dark.

you fooled me.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Isn't the Sun amazing...

nice work...

Posted 8 Years Ago


ALL HAIL THE GREAT STAR.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on November 11, 2010
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JanieB
JanieB

Paphos, Europe, Cyprus



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I started writing in October '10. A real new bee to this world of writing. I currently live in Cyprus, where I have been since 2005. I am British, and have spent many years living abroad. Please j.. more..

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