Always Have and Always Will

Always Have and Always Will

A Poem by ..R.I.P..

I don't care if you push me away

I don't care if you think it's best to just leave

I'll fight everything you throw my way

Because I love you like no other before

 

I love you

Always have and always will

I'm not walking away this time

I know it's meant to be

 

You've always been my inspiration

To stand up when I've been pushed down

You're worth fight to live

Worth losing everything to win you

 

I'm fighting a battle I must win

A war that will exist throughout time and space

We were meant to be

Always have and always will

 

© 2009 ..R.I.P..


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Nice write! I really liked the strength and affection that shone through in this piece. The repitition of 'Always have and always will' was really effective as well. In the third stanza in the third line, you have "You're worth fight to live", which I'm guessing is supposed to be "You're worth THE fight to live"?
Anyway, this was a really heartfelt write, and I thought that the last line of the last stanza was the perfect way to end your poem! :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago



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