Fireflies

I wanted to catch one

They light up at night

So fascinating in my sight

I hope to catch one someday

Whenever I do they fly away

They help me see

What's under that tree

And guide me always

Reviews

[Vesa Lee]

It may be short but that's not necessarily a bad thing.
Sometime the greatest and most profound things can be said in one breath. :)

I like this.
It reminds me of all the times I've marveled at the fireflies myself.
Little baby star; I was convinced that's what them must be. ^-^
Lovely write.

[ghost writer]

you have a great sense of rhyme... :]

[Luna]

this is really well detailed, the images coming through clearly. beautiful description of fireflies.

[~A.J.P.~]

Takes me back to summer nights when I was a kid. :)

[KIMBERLY]

SO CUTE!

[MoonTig3r]

short but very sweet. good job!

[Leech Wife]

Aw, that was nice to read.

[apocalypse]

sweet ..:)

[Jenny Nelson]

It's a pleasant piece to read, a bit fanciful. I liked it!