Seeing You Again

As I've said.True Friendships never end.

I remember sand boxes and Barbie dolls

When we were 4 years old

A couple of years later

We have stories and secrets told

We eat Ice Cream and other sweets

My mom would give you some of my treats

We were best friends

We were sisters

We'd have campings during summers

One day you left and lived out of town

You said you'd come back

You left me with a frown

Years ,I waited out my window

We'd write letters to each other

I keep one under my pillow

One night I received a letter

It said you were coming back this June

I was so excited

I was going to see you really soon

The next day you came

We were happy,we were the same

Our looks and likes may be different now

But our friendship will always stay

Since then we're still together 

We have this necklace

There written:Best Friends Forever

I'm so glad you came back

I hope you'll never leave again

So that I'll never say these words below 

Again,I'll see you soon my friend

Reviews

[natzky]

this poem of yours is really great and perfectly penned...:)

[1234,1234]

Well done. The flow needs tiny bit of work, but other than that- youre good! :)

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Aw, this is really a sweet poem :)
I can relate to this, only I moved away from my best friend.

[lamia]

nice poem , i wish that friendship is as simple as that , but it's a good subject and you did a good job :)

[Christopher.Holmberg]

I liked it . :) 10/10

[ghost writer]

awesome:)

[Devyani]

I agree with Jason about the flow. Other than that this is a very nice poem. It reminds me of my friends who have moved away or aren't in as much contact as I'd like .. either way they're still my friends :)

[Jason]

i liked this how ever the overall flow of the poem is lost at times. Not much you can really do there though with out getting cheesy with over rhyming. The content is good. Good Job :)