Alcohol

Alcohol

A Poem by Jasmijn

You drank me up

so greedy

so complete

like you simpely couldn't get enough

 

And then you got tired of my taste

and spit me out

like I was the dirtiest, poisonous mix

of love, trust and warmth

of something you've never known

 

And there I was lying on the floor

dripping 

besides the broken, empty bottle of my body

liquid

so sour, so bitter

 

They all say alcohol is the problem

but maybe you weren't ready to drink 

© 2017 Jasmijn


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Nice metaphor of alcohol. I liked the usage of it, I was awestruck to read this. I liked it a lot.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jasmijn

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! This is my first poem on this site !
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

And a very good one 😀
Welcome to this site. Hope you have a good time here.

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Jasmijn
Jasmijn

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