survive

Drowning and suffocating

slowly hitting the bottom 

of my abilities

There's no life for me 

to breathe from

There's no reason for me

to stay

I'm desperately choking

on my weaknesses

Please stranger,

help me

help me

survive

Reviews

[Elizabeth Mars]

Sad but moving piece, the poem is easy to read and follow, and I like the complexity of the piece's context versus the simplicity of the writing. Well done! :)

[Jasmijn]

Thank you so much! love x